In the wonderful design of things you receive a B+ with regard to effort. Where exactly you misplaced us was in the details. You know, it is said, details make or break the argument.. And that couldn't be much more true in this article. Having said that, allow me say to you exactly what did give good results. Your article (parts of it) is actually extremely engaging which is most likely why I am making the effort to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, although I can easily see a leaps in logic you make, I am not necessarily certain of exactly how you seem to unite your details that help to make the actual final result. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your point but wish in the near future you actually link your dots better.