In this great pattern of things you'll get a B+ just for effort. Exactly where you confused everybody was first in the specifics. You know, they say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more true in this article. Having said that, allow me tell you what did deliver the results. Your article (parts of it) is actually rather engaging and this is probably the reason why I am making an effort in order to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, although I can easily notice a jumps in logic you come up with, I am not certain of how you seem to unite the points which make the actual final result. For now I will yield to your issue but hope in the future you connect the facts better.