In this grand design of things you actually receive a B+ with regard to hard work. Where exactly you lost me was first in your details. As people say, the devil is in the details... And that couldn't be more true at this point. Having said that, permit me reveal to you what exactly did deliver the results. The writing is actually highly powerful and this is probably the reason why I am taking an effort in order to comment. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can certainly see a jumps in reasoning you come up with, I am not necessarily confident of exactly how you seem to unite your details which in turn produce your final result. For now I shall yield to your issue but hope in the future you connect the facts much better.