In this excellent scheme of things you secure a B+ just for hard work. Exactly where you actually lost everybody was first on the details. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more true right here. Having said that, allow me tell you just what did give good results. The text is definitely really powerful and that is possibly the reason why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Next, while I can notice a jumps in logic you make, I am not really confident of exactly how you seem to connect your details which in turn produce the actual conclusion. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your point however trust in the future you connect your dots better.