In the great design of things you'll receive an A+ just for effort. Where you lost us ended up being on all the specifics. As it is said, details make or break the argument.. And it couldn't be much more true at this point. Having said that, permit me tell you exactly what did do the job. Your authoring is definitely rather engaging which is possibly the reason why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Secondly, even though I can certainly notice the leaps in logic you make, I am not certain of exactly how you appear to unite the points which in turn make the final result. For the moment I shall subscribe to your issue however hope in the future you actually link the dots much better.