In the grand design of things you secure a B+ for effort. Exactly where you actually confused me personally was on your specifics. You know, as the maxim goes, details make or break the argument.. And that could not be more true in this article. Having said that, let me tell you what did give good results. The writing is definitely quite engaging and this is probably the reason why I am making an effort to comment. I do not really make it a regular habit of doing that. 2nd, while I can see a jumps in reason you come up with, I am not really certain of how you appear to connect your points that make the actual final result. For now I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but hope in the future you connect your facts better.