In this excellent pattern of things you'll get a B+ for effort and hard work. Exactly where you actually confused everybody was in the particulars. You know, it is said, the devil is in the details... And it could not be more accurate right here. Having said that, permit me tell you just what did work. Your authoring can be really engaging and this is probably why I am making the effort in order to opine. I do not make it a regular habit of doing that. Second, although I can certainly see a jumps in logic you make, I am definitely not convinced of exactly how you seem to unite the details which in turn produce the final result. For the moment I will, no doubt subscribe to your issue but hope in the future you link the facts much better.